I am loving this cast of characters -- even Queen Sheeba and her friendliness at the party. I like the way this story rides the line between danger and humor. The weird relaxing and tanning next to the pool while a cat is dying, Katty's almost frightening temper and Winston's cluelessness all add up to an engaging mix.
Thank you, Nicole. I really appreciate the feedback. This story did have quite a bit of mixed messages as I was writing that it was a challenge at first to get each POV across without muddying up the others. It was a fun prompt.
You've worked these 3 prompts perfectly into this story. The characters are interesting and I love how you started the story in the middle of all their troubles. Now I'm trying to imagine what they're going to do with a dead cat. Great!
I am loving this cast of characters -- even Queen Sheeba and her friendliness at the party. I like the way this story rides the line between danger and humor. The weird relaxing and tanning next to the pool while a cat is dying, Katty's almost frightening temper and Winston's cluelessness all add up to an engaging mix.
Thank you, Nicole. I really appreciate the feedback. This story did have quite a bit of mixed messages as I was writing that it was a challenge at first to get each POV across without muddying up the others. It was a fun prompt.
You've worked these 3 prompts perfectly into this story. The characters are interesting and I love how you started the story in the middle of all their troubles. Now I'm trying to imagine what they're going to do with a dead cat. Great!
Thanks, Quenntis. It was a fun prompt to watch come to life.
Love the characters you created. This doesn’t seem like it was created out of your comfort zone at all.
Thanks, Cody. I appreciate the feedback.